小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

My good friend is a beautiful girl called Betty,who is 12 years old now. She was born in England but these years she lives in Nanjing. She looks very tall and slim,and she wears long black hair. She studies in the 7th grade at Nanjing No.1 secondary School,in Class 1. She loves reading,and every Friday afternoon is her time for a reading club. What's more,she likes singing.She listens to the music at weekends,too. She is polite and helpful,and everyone likes her very much.