Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句偏多,应增加从句使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
From this picture,we can see parents sending emails to their child who live only upstairs. This picture shows us that computers have changed our ways of communication so much. we don't need communicate face to face no matter where you are. And can this replace our communication in the future?I think it can't.We have talked face to facefor most thousands years.When we are talking we should watch the expression on others face.We can't do that on the computer.What's more computer is only a machine,itwillcrash one day.So when it crahes,you must communicate face- to - face.By this time you will find interests in face-to-face. So electronic communication can't replace face-to-face conect.