2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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In China, we have a lot of traditional festival. The Mid-Autumn festival is 15th of august in lunar calendar. I like it so much, because it's means bird nesting of family, and we can enjoy the full moon, meanwhile we eat moon cake. Furthermore, we can do something another activities, like travel, visit your friend etc. In a words, the Mid-Autumn Festival not only is a festival, it represents our traditional culture.