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Learning habit is very important for us. If you want obtain a excellent result in study, you need cultivate a good learning habit that you need insist, because study not only depend one day, you must study every day, and you need have a target during a spell. In addition, you can make a plan for touch the target. You will improve little by little. My biggest problem in the study is that I'm lazy.I will find someone like teacher or my parents to monitor me. I believe that I will change.