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My View on University Ranking Obviously, there more and more universities tend to rank because of believing it will bring them a lot of benefits. It raises a hot debate and people have different opinions toward it. As the popular saying goes: every coin has two sides. For one hand, some people think it will do good to students and is beneficial for them to find a better job. If university is ranked a high level, their students will be more hopeful admitted by good companies which will bring them a more successful and bright life. For another hand, some people against the university ranking. They think it will develop a negative effect on the college which gets the low level, because their students may think their school is not good and they are not good students either. Thus, they may much easier to give up working hard in their studies by lacking confidence to their universities and hopeless future. However, in my opinion, I think the university ranking should not be allowed for causing a damage to our social justices which will give rise to a lot of problems and prejudices. Only in this way can we have a more harmonious and healthy social.
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