2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the chinese traditional festival. it comes from a romantic tale, a beautiful was seperated from her husband and miss her husband very much, so on August 15th on lunar calendar, she always make some mooncakes and imagine that her husband was also taste the delicious and miss her,but now we also pay much attention on this festival cause we think it is a good opportunity for us to get together ,enjoying the full moon, tasting moom cake, meeting our friends and even having a trip with our family,that is amazing.