有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;复杂句采用很棒;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇。
Dear George: I am glad to hear that you will come to my hometown to have a visit this summer holiday,and I will introduce the household hotel for you. First, the room for one person is 30 yuan per day and the room for 2 people is 40 yuan per day.What's more,each person should pay extra 20 yuan for that day's meal. The meal is warm and interesting,which means that you can order the dishes in the family meun or cook the food on your own. Not only at the lunch time that you can enjoy the family's warmth and learn more about China, you can also do it in every minutes when you are with us, You can take part in fantastic activities such as bathing in the sea,swimming,climbing hills or helping in farm which is without payment. That is all about our household hotel,hope I can see you soon! Your Dear Rae