2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional festivals. it comes from a romantic tale. A beautiful woman was seperated from her husband and miss her husband very much, so on August 15th on lunar calendar, she always made some mooncakes and imagined that her husband was also taste the delicious and miss her,But now we also pay much attention on this festival cause we think it is a good opportunity for us to get together ,enjoying the full moon, tasting moon cake, meeting our friends and even having a trip with our family,that is amazing.