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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
With economic and technology imprving quickly,enviroment pollution become a serious problem which trouble people so much. There are two divide view to deal with that. Someone believe that it is too late to get it better.On the other hand,The others think that we can do a lot of things to recover enviroment. In my opinion ,we really damage enviroment deeply,but it still could be gone back .I have learn that there is anything that we won't make if we want.Our technology is always in progress.Nowadays we even can take advantage of sunshine to make energy which is not even imagined ago.I believe that it is not diffcult to deal with enviroment pollution,but why this problem become more serious? Just because we are very self
