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I live thirty kilometres away from the centre of the town. Our house is in the countryside. I go to school by bus every day. It always takes my nearly an hour to get to my school on public transport. There are many people at the station for waiting bus. The bus only run once twenty minutes. It is very hard for students to get on the bus. The bus is full of people. Some one just stand without seats. I hope to get fresh air in the bus, But I can't. It isn't good to our health. Once I miss the bus and no enough time for waiting next one, I have to change at two different station alone the way. Then I can arrive at my school on time. I hope to move in new house nearly the school, I can go to school by walk or bike.
