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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299[网页划词已开启]
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。

用户练习作文:

How to Succeed in a Job Interview Some people think that it is difficult to get a job because the job interview is not easy for themselves .But another ones see it is so easy .Now I would talk some important keys for reaching the work which you want. Firstly,we need to take care of our outlook and the style of talking and walking that are our first impression to other person .If they are good , we will be accepted by the people which may be our boss in the future and will get a better remake .Secondly, it is the ability which is the actual thing in the work. The ability may help the company get benefice from their workers ,so it is the vital role in the interview.The final which I concern importantly is confidence,it could make you be more charmer and be concerned more succeed than your reality.

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