2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

复杂句的使用不是很丰富；文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

It ususlly comes in September or October.On that day families eata big dinner They also eat moon cakes.These are small round cakes They taste a little like pies Many families eat their dinner outside in the open air. The moon looks brighter and rounder on this day .People often talk about their families and tell the story of Chang'er.