Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章用词太过单一,高级词汇使用不足,单词拼写错误较多;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
In this picture.parents conmunicates with their child in the computer only hopes their child can come downstairs for something to eat. As is known to all. face to face conmunacate is more important than electronic communicate.even if electronic communicate can give us convenience.but if we ignore face-to-face communicate,we must lose the love of person to person. In my opinion,the internet has two sides.The internet offers a lots of use for the life of us.but electronic communicate can never replace face-to-face contact.