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字数:300 满分:100分
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆。
Traditional China is a typical system of patriarchal society. In family life, father and husband has absolute authority, as a woman who can only obey and cannot resist. “ In the relationship between husband and wife, China between couples rely on “husband guides wife” as ethical specification and claims men and women are different at the same time. Some things men can do, but women cannot do, which for Chinese women is extremely unfair. ”[6]The view that men are superior to women, which make the status of the couple in marriage is very unfair. Husband often at home wives and concubines and they still go round singsong houses, but the wife should bear in mind that “women do not serve two husbands”, even if her husband is dead and they cannot remarry. Xu Anmei’s mother is a typical example. Anmei’s father died when she was a child. Her mother intends to keep the feudal ethical code and for her husband to live in widowhood for a lifetime, but because to be fooled and tricked by Wu Qing tarnished, she can only marry him as a concubine. Family misunderstands her and thinks that she is a loose woman, defiled ancestors and shameless woman. An Mei’s grandmother and uncle do not let her mother go home from this time, which are caused by the tragedy of AnMei’s mother suicide. However, the man is able to “men road”. Ying Ying’s husband left his wife to stay at home after marry and give birth to babies, but he is out of debauchery and sometimes even take a woman’s home. He completely ignored his wife at home position, so Ying Ying make a killing their children stupid. Western respect is the concept of Jesus Christ, so their concept of marriage is also influenced by the Christian deeply. They think that the status of the couple in marriage is equal. The two are needed each other and supplement each other. Disciple Paul of the New Testament in the New Testament Ephesians said: Wives, submit yourselves unto your own husbands, as unto the Lord; So ought men to love their wives as their own bodies; “He that loves his wife loves himself.”[7] Stressed that the husband and wife to love each other, the equality of the husband and wife. Harold and Lina are living in the United States and accept American education. They consider that equality of men and women, so when they are in love, all the expenses are shared equally until after getting married, they still keep this habit. Harold’s salary is seven times for Lena, but in their opinion, split is the performance of gender equality. Life for a long time, they often argue about who should pay for this, who should pay for that. Lena thinks that it is not equal, but Harold does not think so. In order to respect and equal, Lina brave to end his unequal marriage. Although Lina’s marriage failed, she is able to end the mistake. It is enough to see how the American people are pursuing the equality of marriage. If the marriage is not consistent, they would rather abandon it and also seek to get equal treatment of marriage.