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雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:学校 schools

发布时间:2013-07-17 16:29浏览次数:912[网页划词已开启]
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Some people think that single sex schools are better for students than co-ed schools. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;请注意分段。

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Single-sex high schools help to produce better students because there are fewer distractions in these kinds of schools than in co-educational schools. Nowadays, students are learning more than ever before, and while they are trying to understand all this new knowledge, they do not need distractions. If boys and girls are studying together, they may become more focused on each other and not concentrate on the lesson. For example, a male student might be more interested in impressing a female peer than listening to the teacher; similarly, female students might get into arguments over popular boys, or spend their time discussing the boys in their class instead of listening to the teacher. If high schools are single sex, these kinds of distractions can be reduced.

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