作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Due Attention Should Be Given To the study of Chinese Recently, a new study showed that more and more students paid little attention to the study of Chinese that resulted from lacking confidence to our own countries and learning foreign languages. There is no denying the fact that it will give rise to a lot of social problems and have a negative effect on our countries of culture. And there are some results following. For one hand, if we ignore the study of the language of our own countries, we may lose a chance to know about our Advanced Chinese Culture which will bring us energy and faith. And then, it will cause a great crisis to the safety of our countries and cultures. For another hand, it may cause a communication problem in daily life. Worse still, they may lose the ability to write and read while they are not familiar with the Chinese language. Thus, in my opinion, instead of giving up studying Chinese, what we should do is paying more attention to it. Only in this way can we take a good advantage of our traditional culture and keep our countries safe and solid.