2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

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Xing Guang High School had held a outdoor activity. It was arranged on April 10th and their destination is Daqing Mountain. The students was delight, they arrived at the feet of the mountain with a full of bag on their back. when all of the students come here, every class teacher stood in front of the queen and told the students that everyone should be carefully and ride the mountain without pushing. the students enjoying a nice day, they learned to share, to help, to enjoy the beautiful scenery. when the sun setting, all of us returned. The activity I think would be a unforgetton memory in every students' heart. I hope it will have more meaningful and interesting activities to be hold.