2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

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Xing Guang High School had held an outdoor activity. It was arranged on April 10th and their destination is Daqing Mountain. The students were delight so they arrived at the foot of the mountain with a full of bag on their backs. When all of the students come here, every class teacher stood in front of the queen and told the students that everyone should be carefully and go hiking the mountain without pushing. the students enjoying a nice day, they learned to share, to help, to enjoy the beautiful scenery. When the sun was setting, all of us returned. The activity I think would be an unforgettable memory in every students' heart. I hope it will have more meaningful and interesting activities to be carried out.