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There are always lots of people drawing a conclusion once they hear or see something. However, as far as I am concerned, I really disagree that it is a rational way to deal with things. On the one hand, what you heard or saw sometimes might not actual enough. You may just see the surface of the truth. On the other hand, we need to make full use of our mind to understand what happend logically, which could avoid us making erros. In my mind, I hope everyone be rational enough to make conclusions instead of believing on your subjective judgements, which will help all of us a lot.
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