题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
请作者注意多用高级词汇以及个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
Our world has witnessed the unpredictable development in our life, humanities have created millions of wealth. However, following with the economical improvement, the quality of people's life is dropped sharply in large cities. First and the most seriously are the environmental problems. As for many cities, there used to have blue and sunny sky, fresh and clean air etc. But now, there is a commom phenomenon, no matter the old or the young going out need to wear breathing masks due to the polluted air, which is really uncomfortable. Secondly, with the achievements of thechnology, more and more white-collars have to sit before the computers for the whole day,they also need to stay up late to finish the huge files and documentaries. Day by day,they suffered lots of deseases. The pressure of citizens is also another heavy problem. People today become busier and busier, they even could not reunion with their families in Spring Festival, the tradional Chinese festival. In my mind, on the one hand,we should develop economics. On the other hand,we also have to find a environment-friendly way to get along with nature. In the meanwhile,nowadays people need to balance their woking and relaxing. During the leisure time, accompanying with your families or friends by travling or just having a simple dinner together. I sincerely wish we can build a harmonious and green society.