2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇表达灵活丰富，希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；文中衔接词丰富。

Our world has witnessed the unpredictable development in our life, humanities has created a great amounts of wealth. However, following the economical improvement, the quality of people's life is dropped sharply in large cities. First and the most seriously is the environmental problem. As for many cities, there used to have blue and sunny sky, fresh and clean air etc. But now, there is a common phenomenon, no matter the old or the young going out need to wear breathing masks due to the polluted air, which is really uncomfortable. Secondly, with the achievements of technology, more and more white-collars must sit before the computers for the whole day,they also need to stay up late to finish the huge number of documentaries. Day by day,they suffered lots of deseases. Citizens' pressure is also another serious problem. People today become busier and busier, they even could not reunion with their families in Spring Festival, the traditional Chinese festival. In my mind, on the one hand,we should develop economics. On the other hand,we also have to explore a environmental and friendly way to get along with nature. In the meanwhile,nowadays people need to balance their woking and relaxing. During the leisure time, accompanying with your families or friends by travling or just having a simple dinner together. I sincerely wish we can establish a harmonious and green society.