2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowdays,shopping online has became a fashion. As we all know,shopping online plays an important role in our life.Shopping online is good for us .To begin with,it is convenient for us to go shopping if we do not want to go out. In addition to,there is no doubt that we can buy cheaper goods .What is more,not only can we save time,but also we can buy many beautiful goods.As an old saying goes,"every coin has two sides." Therefore,shopping online is as the like.On the one hand,there is no deneying that we can not see the really goods.On the other hand,the quality of the goods we decide to buy can not be guanranted. As far as i am concerned,when we buy something we are supposed to take it into consideration.Additionally,we can ask our friends for advice ,shopping on the internet.Only in this way, we can buy the goods what we want to buy.