题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;文中衔接词丰富。
Our world has witnessed the unpredictable development in our life, humanities has created a great amount of wealth. However, following the economical improvement, the quality of people's life is dropped sharply in large cities. First and the most seriously is the environmental problem. As for many cities, there used to have blue and sunny sky, fresh and clean air etc. But now, there is a common phenomenon, no matter the old or the young going out need to wear breathing masks due to the polluted air, which is really uncomfortable. Secondly, with the achievements of technology, more and more white-collars must sit before the computers for the whole day,they also need to stay up late to complete the huge number of documentaries. Day by day,they suffered lots of deseases. Citizens' pressure is also another serious problem. People today become busier and busier, they even could not reunion with their families in Spring Festival, the traditional Chinese festival. In my mind, on the one hand,we should develop economics. On the other hand,we also need to explore a friendly way to get along with nature. In the meanwhile,nowadays people need to balance their woking and relaxing. Accompanying your families or friends by traveling or just having a simple dinner together in your leisure time. I sincerely wish we can establish a harmonious and green society.