2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Our world has witnessed the unpredictable development in our life while humanities has created a great amount of wealth. However, following the economic improvement, the quality of people's life is dropped sharply in large cities. First and the most seriously is the environmental problem. As for many cities, there used to have blue and sunny sky, fresh and clean air etc. But now, there is a common phenomenon, no matter the old or the young going out need to wear breathing masks due to the polluted air, which is really uncomfortable especially for children. Because of the destroyed habitats, millions of animals face to be extinct. Secondly, with the achievements of technology, more and more white-collars must sit before the computers for the whole day, sometimes they also need to stay up late to complete the huge number of documentaries. Day by day, they suffered lots of diseases. Citizens' pressure is also another serious problem. People today become busier and busier, they even could not reunion with their families in Spring Festival, the most significant and traditional Chinese festival. In my mind, on the one hand, we should develop economics. On the other hand, we also need to explore a friendly way to get along with nature, instead of destroying it. As for modern diseases, government is required to improve the medicare system to guarantee staff's health. In the meanwhile, nowadays people need to balance their working and relaxing. People should not only improve their working efficiency, but accompanying your families or friends by traveling or just having a simple dinner together in your leisure time are good choices. I sincerely wish we can establish a harmonious and green society. One day people can enjoy splendor landscape of their countries, build a happy and warm family.