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The Benifits of Volunreering During the 2008 Olympic Game,many college served for foreign people by using their language skills,they are the volunteers.Recently,more and more people choose to be a volunteer.They hold the idea thatit is a meaningful thing to be a voluneer. It not only offer help to those in need,but also improve your personal abilities.Here are two facts. To begin with,as a foreign language major,there is nothing better than practice language in public.Being a volunteer,you will have the chance to talk directly to the foreigners. It's the best way to improve your spoken English.What's more,your team work spirit can be improved when you are a volunteer.When we solve problems,we can realize the significance of team work spirit and gain the experience of job application after graduation. In conclusion,being a volunteer benifits us a lot in many aspects.We should apply for being a volunteer and offer our help.