高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
The Benefits of Volunteering During the 2008 Olympic Game, many college students served for foreign people by using their language skills,and they are the volunteers.Recently,more and more people choose to be a volunteer.They hold the idea that it is a meaningful thing to be a voluneer. It not only offer help to those in need, but also improve your personal abilities.Here are two facts. To begin with, as a foreign language major, there is nothing better than practice language in public. Being a volunteer,you will have the chance to talk directly to the foreigners. It's the best way to improve your spoken English. What's more, your team work can be improved when you are a volunteer. When solving problems, we can realize the significance of team work spirit and gain the experience of job application after graduation. In conclusion,being a volunteer benefits us a lot in many aspects.We should apply to be a volunteer and offer our help.