过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少。
After a child born his parents would give him a name. Not only in Chinese, but also in other countries, this is a common tradition. Most of the parents will pay more attention to the name of their baby, some of them will consider the problem early after the mother with child. Just as many parents except, psychologists have proven it to be true that the name will give some infect on the baby. For instance, if you named your boy as Hill, OK, he do be very courage in his life. But on the other hand, not all the parents regard the name is so important to the baby, and in fact, not all the babies with the name as Hill will be brave in their lives. Perhaps the baby with a common name will have a common but happy life, this will more better for their parents. After all, the name is very important for everyone, as a sign belongs to you.