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Nowadays, Information explosion is a inevitable tendency of our society, which impact our wall-to-wall aspects. But there is too much wealthless information, which will get rise to a poverty of our attention. We must choose the wealth information from the information sea. We can do this things to improve our bility. Firstly, some profession websites can be taken a close eye on, not all the information. we can scan the wealth information more easily. secondly, we must perserve the valuable information when the information is be scanned by us. We can easily find it, if we want to use this information. thirdly, we can find the information from many channel. we must remember the best channel. In my opinion, if we do all the things as the above said. we can't be named as a poverty of attention. The government can publish some related laws to regulate the website and ads. At last, our society will become more hormony.
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