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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
With people's lives become increasingly better,nowadays more and more people travel around.Because of that,the campus be open to tourists or not being an issue. However,people's opinions about it vary from person to person.Some of them support that the campus should be open,for it will be a glorious approach for every college to show their fascinating environment and culture.Meanwhile,opening campus to tourists can also offer college lots of profits,so that the school may get enough money to make the university more and more charmingly. Yet other people worries that the disadvantages seems far more than the benefits.Firstly,once the campus opened,there must be plenty of tourists come into,then the great study environment will be broken,both teachers and students cannot pay their all attentions on academical.What's more,although opening campus might bring some profits,still no one could promise that the money will all spend on academical. From my perspective,opening campus to tourists is beneficial or harmful just depends on person who organize it.As long as we all focus on what we really treasure,no matter we opening campus or not,it will be beneficial.
