2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. I like model making and playing computer games with my litter brother. I want to lean how play chess. You know I have no enought time to play before the exam, I do my housework till middle night every day. If it doesn't rain, I want to do something ourdoors, Like skating. Do you like skating? I am not good at it, But I like it, I will do more exercise after the exam. If you come to China, I will take you to go to play. Next door to my house there is a large sport and leisure complex made up of severial buildings, There is a rink for ice skating, an indoor swimming pool, a bowling alley, and a building conpaining courts and other rooms for indoor sports such as squash, badminton and table tennis, you will have a good holiday. Yours, David