2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

As we all know, Shenzhen is a city speedly devoloping and there are so many interestingplaces. But in my opinon, OCT is the most insterstingplace i have been,where have such much young guys there to reach their potential. There also have a number of imagicial coffee shop, it was the places can feel relaxed and comfortable in ShenZhen where people live in a such fast pace.At night, OCT get into active, youths come from everywhere will get togerther and throw a big part to change their thoughts or some spectial things.