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Life is meaningless. I know it's a bit difficult for human being to accept the concept of the meaningless life. One of my families died a few days ago, one lesson I've learned from it, that when you're gone, everything about you will gradually dissapear too. For a long time, we were taught to spend our limited life for something will outlast it. I just can't feel what's good for the dead man to be talked about, whether it's about their kindness or cowerdice. He feels nothing. I'm not saying we could just kill ourself or hanging around to have some fun for the rest of our life, but we should stop searching the meaning of our life. Paying attention to your study, thinking about how to cheat people around you better, to make a better life of your family, in my opinion, is what we should do in our life.
