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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9025
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;衔接成分偏少。

用户练习作文:

Life is meaningless. I know it's a bit difficult for human being to accept the concept of the meaningless life. One of my families died a few days ago, one lesson I've learned from it is that when you're gone, everything about you will gradually disappear too. For a long time, we were taught to spend our limited life for something will outlast it. I just can't feel what's good for the dead man to be talked about, whether it's about their kindness or cowardice. He feels nothing. I'm not saying we could just kill ourself or hanging around to have some fun for the rest of our life, but we should stop searching the meaning of our life. Paying attention to your study, thinking about how to cheat people around you better, to make a better life of your family, in my opinion, is what we should do in our life.

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