小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章衔接手法恰当；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

I have a good friend, his name is Jerry, who is ten years old this year. He was born in xi'an city shanxi province. His hair is very black, and the eyes are bright. He likes riding a bicycle usually. He is very careful, when meet questions, he often ask some "why". He likes food very much,and does it by himself sometimes.