2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者词汇基础不错，同时请加强单词拼写的检查；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误。

it is unwise to get a conclusion right away listening or seeing in a real word,we are always too rely on our feelings of our eyes or ears to result in a terrable concusion.for example,one of my friend misunderstand me once,and we have not talk to each other for a long time.during this time,i explain to she but she never believe me.i am so sad and decided not to talk to she any more.but this kind of cold war was broken out becouse of my another friend.she told my friend the fact carefully,and dissuade her not to annoy with me unless she don't want making friend with me any more.luckly,we become good friend again now. acting like an adult is difficult especially the age enter the 20 just now.we usually out of our control when we meet with a shocking things.but as we all know it is unwise to do a thing like this.so how to contorl ourself?there are some advises below. at first,we should form a patient temper,listening to others patiently . and then,we should find a better way to release our annoy.like listening music or writing. next,we should learn to tust others,believe them there is a misunderstanding