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文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是高级词汇使用较少；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
The natural life that we are fond of was far away from us step by step. The feelings of living a qualitical life decreased quickly. Do you ever want to catch a meaningful step to go closely to your real life? Yes, I do. I desire this living style. Looking at the following example I have taken: There is an eight-year-old girl whose parents have settled down on the remote mountains for a long time. She feared to the environment surrounding by her becouse of the fierce animals. One day, her dad went out with her to fair. Unfortunately, they meet a tiger. As soon, they saw two huntsman ride shotgun next to the tiger. The girl felt scare but do not hope the tiger being hurt. She aksed her dad to save it. Her dad said," To do what do you want to do with a kind-hearted, don't be afraid, my good girl." Then the girl ran out to the front of hunters in order to told them we should protect the tiger but not trace and arrest it. Finally, the two huntsman gave up to caught animals because of her courage and kind. From that on, the girl got rid of fear and do all what she can do to protect animals.So this is a meaningful living style. What I want to do meaningful is try my best to do something that I can do possibly. No confine, no ruler, like planting more trees, do help for the disabled, aid the poor students and so on. To do what I think is meaningful.
