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字数：300 满分：100分
文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
In my opinion, I just thought as students, most of them ask money from their parents, they are independent. So the ways to take the money efficiently make them smart consumers. then the identify about smart consumers is not to pay lots of money for the latest fashionable clothes or somethings but the persons who spend less money buying the best things that they recognize. It's about personal aspect. so all I want to say is no matter collecting all kinds of coupons or buying clothes on sales, it's a modern life style, it‘s nothing like smart consumers.
