2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

My views on online shopping Nowadays online shopping has already become a fashion in our daily life. More and more people tend to buy what they need on the internet. It is obvious that online shopping has many advantages. First of all, it is convient for people to buy things whenever and wherever if they have wifi. Second, online shopping can saving a lot of money by the discount.Each coin has two sides.Online shopping has some disadvantages.For example, buyers can't touch the object by their hands and don't know the whole information about the object they want to buy. In my opinion, even though online shopping can bring people conveinence and discount, it can't replace the position of tranditional shopping. All in all, go to the supermaket or the mall if you really have some spare time.