2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shopping Nowadays online shopping has already become a fashion in our daily life. More and more people tend to buy what they need on the internet. It is obvious that online shopping has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient for people to buy things whenever and wherever if they have wifi. Second, online shopping can save a lot of money by the discount.Each coin has two sides.Online shopping has some disadvantages.For example, buyers can't touch the object by their hands and don't know the whole information about the object they want to buy.What's more,online shopping may let us lose the chance to communicate with people by face to face. In my opinion, even though online shopping can bring people conveinence and discount, it can't replace the position of traditional shopping. All in all, go to the supermarket or the mall if you really have some spare time.