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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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Interview is the begin of a new job. Not only the college students, but also other people shoud pay more attention to it, because many of us are dissatisfied with their jobs, and want to have a chance to change someday. In generally, a person will have two or thire times to change their work in their life. If you get an invent to attend the interview, you are so lucky in fact. Because many times there will be many people applied for the chance, but only few of them could get it. So you should make a good preparition. A fit and clear suit is necessary. And your behavor is also very important, througe which other people could get the base impression about you. But all of these are not the most important. What the most important is? I think you should spend a lot of time in making your homework, to get the information about the company and the work you applied for, more and more possible.

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