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Welcome to my hometown! It's located on heyuan,guangdong provided.it's economy worse than other city, but they are very friendly and warmheart.In my hometown ,you will see a lot of flowers in Spring. Therefore you wil smell sweet smell everywhere.Of course, expect flowers,there are wealthy of fruit, you can eat furit in season.It's very sweet and tasty. In addittion,there're a street where are so many located food and you can meet located culture. it's very cheap.