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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33570
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。

用户练习作文:

Should we are careful with our money in daily life? Nowadays most of us are careful with our money in daily life.we like collecting all kinds of coupons,which can bring us discount.And when we go out for a meal or a travel,we will look for group-buy deals. sometimes we don't buy expensive clothes unless in a sale.Therefore, Some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers.Others think that this is a smart decision.As far as I am concerned,I support that we should be careful with our money in daily life.There are some reasons. For me,I am a college student that I don't have any economic capability.I have to be careful with my money.Because I don't think it is for my parents to make money.Moreover,I have a brother who is college student like me.Every time at the beginning of the term,we all need a lot of money.In order to reduce the burden on my parents,so my brother and I are careful with our money.Besides,It is really not easy for our parents and ourselves to make money.In the future,I will get married and I will have my family,my baby.There is too much money to spend in our life.So no matter at all times we should be careful with the money. According these example,I hope each of us can be careful with our money in daily life.It is said that money is not everything,but no money is absolutely not.So we take every coin seriously.

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