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Social development today has not only greatly influenced our values and world outlines, but also brought the new way we use money while others insist on spending tomorrow's money. From my perspective, i have a strong inclination that we should save money rather than spend tomorrow's money. First of all, saving money largely aids in cultivating the good habits of diligence and frugality, which are admittedly the traditional virtues of Chinese souls. In addition, having a certain amount of money in hand, we could handle various unexpected and emergent things in a delibarate and unimpassioned manner, otherwise, we are inevitably struck in a finance crisis and have to as for other's assist to get over the difficulty. Moreover, what is the best way to live a smooth and steady life is to saving money. Without anxious debts and loans , what you have already cost is what you have ever earned, therefore, you will be in a cheerful frame of mind. Taking these factors into consideration, saving money is more of a sort of Chinese consumption than spending tomorrow's money.
