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Dear Xiao Wang, Hi!How are you?It is have a long time for meeting you.So I am so happy to hear that you are going to visit me.For you will have a the interesting week,I have some suggestions and something that you need to take care. Firstly,you had best tell some of places which you will wish to visit ,so that we could take a plan and prepare what would be needed.Secondly,you could take a list for what you need to pick up for the holiday.Thirdly,the temperature are various ,so you could take some clothes for hot day and some for cool day.The finally ,you had best start to leave home for one hour earlier than the bus start to leave,so you could have enough time for the way to go to the bus station. At the end,I wish you will have a good holiday.Good luck to you. Your sincerely, Zhang Ying
