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At present online shopping is poupolar and fashional life style all over the world ,Alibba in china and Amazon in USA have developed to be the two largest online shopping supermarket,more and more people try to buy what they need online. In fact,the online shopping develops so fast because it is very convenience for consummer to get what they want to buy.Before online shopping appears,people have to go to the suppermarket to choose what they need,generally there is a long distance between supermarket and home,it would take long time to go there by car or by bus.Now，you just need a computer even a smart mobile phone at any place to buy everything online,and the owner of the shop online would send what you bought to you,and you just need wait for it at home,it save a lot of time for consummer.Otherwise,the goods are usually cheaper online than offline,beacause the owner of shop don't need a real shop on offline and save much cost for them. But,online shopping also has its disadvantage.For consummers ,they want to buy better and much cheaper goods from online,but sometime,they maybe would buy fake goods throught the goods pictures online,or they are cheated by the beautiful pictures and buy something what they don't need.From other side，if you bought something unsuitable and want to exchange a new one,the process will be very complex and you have to take the cost of the express delivery. In all,online shopping is a conmmercial trend and will be a part of our life to influnence our life.
