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At present online shopping is popular and fashional life style all over the world , Alibba in China and Amazon in USA have developed to be the two largest online shopping supermarket, more and more people try to buy what they need online. In fact,the online shopping develops so fast because it is very convenient for consumers to get what they want to buy.Before online shopping appears,people must go to the supermarket to choose what they need,generally there is a long distance between supermarket and home,it would take a long time to go there by car or by bus.Now，you just need a computer even a smart mobile phone at any place to buy everything online,and the owner of the shop online would deliver what you bought to you,and you just need wait for it at home,it save a lot of time for consumers.Otherwise,the goods are usually cheaper online than offline,because the owner of shop don't need a real shop on offline and it saves much cost for them. But,online shopping also has its disadvantage.For consumers ,they want to buy better and much cheaper goods online,but sometime,they maybe would buy fake goods through the goods pictures online,or they are cheated by the beautiful pictures and buy something what they don't need.From otherside，if you bought something unsuitable and wanted to exchange a new one,the process will be very complex and you must take the cost of the express delivery. In all,online shopping is a commercial trending and will be a part of our life to influnence our life.
