2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(69):Health

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Health is far more important than wealth. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. To stay healthy, we should bear some fundamental principles in mind. Firstly, it is very important for us to keep a balanced diet and eat plenty of fruits and vegetables because they can provide us with rich vitamins. Secondly, we’d better exercise every day t keep fit . Most importantly, we should develop positive attitudes towards life and take an active part in communicating with others. Meanwhile we should understand and respect others and be tolerant as well. In conclusion, if we follow the above advice, it’s very likely for us to lead a healthy and happy life.