2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分偏少；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

If a foreign come to visit my country i will take him to my hometown zhanjiang .zhanjiang is good place to visit,it has many sences of beach,you can swin in the sea and the most important is that the sea water is good to your skin.you can play with you in the sand .around the sea it has many for you to babiku