采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
With the development of the society, more and more requirments are setted for different jobs. If you want to be a teacher, a doctor, or an engineer, you'll be required to exam and get the just certificate, whice means that you have the ability to do that. Not many years ago, certificate was not so immportant like it is now. Collage graduates were not so many at that time, and they were arranged to different jobs. It's not necessary to warry about whether you could do it, what you could do just accept. And once you had a job, in generally, you would do it till you retired. But now, the graduates will not be arranged, they have to apply jobs for various companies. When they attend an interview , they need something to prove that they have the ability just they applied for. So the certificate is more and more important.