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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
Now, more and more people like communicating in the Internet.Wherever they like playing the phone or computure.Therefore,there're a big distance in many people.Sometime,it'll lead to a ward in a family which they will arngry bentween couple. In fact, I think that the electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact because we alawaly rely on face-to-face contact in our daily life.What's more it can improve our happiness and then it's also can make us known more and and people emtional.
